Wednesday, August 10, 2011

[gravity]

ironing out the inevitable,

the heaviness of metals, like led,

(i can still hear)

sleek chilled water
washes over black coal in the night;

it ebbs, and lets
in the light.

improving the aperture,

the dilution of ink as it bled.

(can't be far now; so i try my joints:)

i can still feel.~

3 comments:

  1. Very Powerful...
    Especially when read aloud.

    You truly capture Feeling...

    BTW, I Love your Description:

    " i am in love with the magic & irony of life. "

    Thank you for sharing, stopping by my humble rantings and commenting :D

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  2. thanks pew. i love visiting your peaceful little world. thanks for browsing mine. :)

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  3. hi sarah... good to see yr blog... hope all is going well... after reading gravity initially i had to go back... little by little each line began to unfold and tell a story... of course, yr story... overall i saw the movement of life exposed... as we all are... that last line lifted me up into the clouds... after reading yr tags all the more so....

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